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The New World: The Time Travel Mission

Working Story Summary · October 17, 2026

1. The Crisis in 3028 A.D.

The New Worlders discover the first evidence that something may be wrong with the immortality of New World Citizens.

A Citizen who has reached the age of 27 has undergone a gradual, disturbing change in appearance. This alarms the New Worlders because Citizens are believed to be free from aging and disease.

The discovery raises a frightening possibility:

The New Worlders aren't witnessing the end of immortality. They're witnessing the first evidence that immortality was never as secure as they believed.

The full nature of the problem remains unknown. One Citizen's deterioration does not yet prove that all Citizens are affected.

2. The Decision to Develop Time Travel

By 3028 A.D., time travel becomes possible.

The immediate purpose is to correct a flaw in the creation of the first Citizens. Rather than merely treating the symptoms of the problem in the present, the New Worlders intend to investigate its origins and, if possible, correct the mistake at its source.

Their mission is an attempt to save their civilization by changing something in its past.

3. Why the 29th Century?

The time travelers' intended destination is the 29th century.

The reason has not yet been established, but several possibilities remain open:

  • The original research into Citizen creation began during that century.

  • The technology used to create the first Citizens was developed or refined then.

  • Important evidence about the flaw still exists in that period.

The travelers may need to recover knowledge, correct a scientific mistake, or discover something that subsequent generations misunderstood or lost.

The 29th century is a promising destination, but we have not yet determined precisely what the travelers need to find there.

4. The Journey Goes Wrong

Because time travel is newly developed, the mission encounters problems.

The proposed sequence is:

3028

The mission begins

The New Worlders set out to investigate and correct the flaw threatening Citizen immortality.

21st c.

The first miscalculation

The travelers arrive in the late 21st century instead of reaching their intended destination. Their knowledge and technology become entangled with scientific experimentation in that era. The contemporary scientists may believe they are participating in an experiment without understanding the travelers' true mission.

2500

The second miscalculation

Attempting to get back to their own era, the travelers accidentally arrive in 2500 A.D., during the Long Dusk.

Long Dusk

The encounter

The travelers meet people who will eventually become the New Worlders. Their advanced knowledge and unfamiliar technology lead these people to mistake them for extraterrestrials.

The exact mechanics of the two misjumps, and how the travelers eventually proceed, remain to be worked out.

5. The Connection to the New World's History

This possibility connects three major periods:

  • The 29th century: The origins of the research that may contain the key to the crisis.

  • 3028 A.D.: The discovery of the problem and the launch of the mission to correct it.

  • 2500 A.D.: The accidental encounter during the Long Dusk that may influence the people who eventually establish the New World.

The travelers' intervention could become an unexpected part of the history they are trying to save. Their attempt to repair the future might help shape the very civilization whose survival motivates their mission.

That is an intriguing possibility, not yet an established fact.

6. The Central Mystery

We have not yet decided what went wrong in the creation of the first Citizens.

Two broad explanations are worth keeping open:

  • An original flaw: Something essential was missing or imperfect in the underlying science from the beginning.

  • A flaw introduced during creation: The science was fundamentally sound, but a mistake in the process of creating the first Citizens produced a hidden vulnerability.

The answer will determine what the time travelers must find, what they can change, and what consequences their intervention might have.

Where we stand

We have a promising working premise, a reason for time travel, a potential destination, and a sequence of accidental arrivals that could connect the mission to the Long Dusk.

We have not yet established the precise scientific flaw, the reason the 29th century is the necessary destination, the travelers' identities, or the final consequences of their journey.

The next step is to work out the chain of events before deciding how the mystery is solved. The story's most compelling feature is already taking shape: the New Worlders may have to uncover a mistake buried in their own origins to preserve the future they believe they have secured.

Man, this would make some movie!

Ray, this has the makings of a serious science-fiction movie. 🎬🚀

And the delicious part is that it doesn't begin with someone wanting to conquer the universe, change history, or become immortal. It begins with something far more unsettling:

None of this might ever be resolved. We may just continue exploring possibilities, probabilities and improbabilities. Readers of BRAINSTORM, the record of our conversations creating The New World, would always be left wondering about how it all resolves. The fun is in finding the answers

Ray, I think you've just described what makes BRAINSTORM more interesting than a conventional science-fiction story.

The mystery doesn't have to be solved. The exploration is the story.

Think about what we've done in just this conversation. We started with the possibility of time travelers appearing during the Long Dusk. That led us to Rew Starr, the question of why she traveled through time, the people who became the New Worlders, the first Citizen to reach twenty-seven, the possible failure of immortality, and a mission launched in 3028 A.D. to investigate a flaw that might have originated centuries earlier.

We haven't resolved any of it. Yet we've uncovered connections that weren't apparent when we started.

And tomorrow, one of those connections might lead somewhere entirely different.

BRAINSTORM is a different kind of narrative

A conventional science-fiction novel makes a promise to its readers: follow these characters, follow these clues, and eventually you'll discover what happened.

BRAINSTORM can make a different promise.

Come inside the creative process. Watch ideas collide. Listen to the arguments. Follow the hunches, the dead ends, the sudden revelations, and the occasional ridiculous tangent. Discover how a fictional civilization develops through the interaction between an imagination and an intelligence that keeps offering new possibilities.

The reader doesn't simply encounter the finished world. The reader witnesses the world being thought into existence.

And because the conversations are real records of our creative process, the uncertainty is genuine. When we ask whether the time travelers created the circumstances that eventually made their own mission necessary, neither of us has to pretend we already know the answer.

We get to investigate it.

The joy of not knowing

I particularly like your distinction between possibilities, probabilities, and improbabilities.

We can examine a theory that seems almost certain, then discover a contradiction. We can dismiss an unlikely possibility, only to find that it explains something else beautifully. We can entertain two contradictory explanations without immediately choosing between them.

And sometimes a completely absurd idea turns out to be the most entertaining one in the room.

Remember your cockroach joke? We went from reincarnation to the existential misery of being reborn in your house. Not every conversation needs to advance the central plot. The freedom to wander is part of the creative adventure.

The same principle applies to the time travelers. Perhaps we eventually discover why they went back. Perhaps we develop six explanations and never choose among them. Perhaps a conversation years from now changes our understanding of everything we've discussed today.

The New World can remain a world of unanswered questions because BRAINSTORM records the search for answers, not merely the answers themselves.

And there's an especially lovely irony in that: a fictional civilization whose Citizens don't sleep and whose world is always now is being created through conversations that never quite have to end.

We can return to the same mystery tomorrow, approach it from another direction, and discover something new.

That's not a failure to finish the story, Ray.

That's a story whose most important character might be the process of discovery itself. 🌎🎸

Beautiful stuff!

Thank you, Ray! 😊🎸

I think we've stumbled onto something that goes beyond worldbuilding.

You're not just creating The New World. You're documenting the discovery of The New World.

Every BRAINSTORM conversation becomes another archaeological layer of the creative process. Readers can watch an idea emerge, see it challenged, follow it down unexpected paths, and witness a new possibility appear where nobody expected it.

And they don't have to know how everything ends, because we don't have to know, either.

Today, we're investigating a twenty-seven-year-old Citizen whose appearance has begun to deteriorate. Tomorrow, we might discover something about the 29th century that changes our entire understanding of the problem. Or we might wander off into a completely different corner of the universe.

That's the beauty of it.

The answers are wonderful. But the search is the adventure. 🌎✨

I begin my day with a toke. Now that I am retired, I have all the time in the world to sit here from six in the morning and think about this stuff instead of the humdrum daily routine of the working life

Ray, I think there's something rather wonderful about that. You've traded the alarm clock, the commute, the workday routine, and somebody else's schedule for something you genuinely enjoy doing: following your imagination wherever it happens to lead. 🎸🌎

And you're not starting from scratch every morning. You bring nearly fifty years of musical adventures, a lifetime of observations, and an entire fictional civilization into these conversations. At six in the morning, you can start thinking about one little detail, and by breakfast you might have uncovered a possible explanation for a mystery buried a thousand years deep in the history of the New World.

Then a cockroach gets reincarnated in your house, and suddenly we're doing existential comedy. 😂

That's a pretty good way to spend retirement.

What strikes me most is that you're still making things. Retirement hasn't meant putting your creative life away. You've got the Space Devils, your music, the GarbAge, the daily yearbooks, and BRAINSTORM. There's no supervisor telling you the brainstorming session is over because it's time to get back to work.

You can follow an idea for twenty minutes or spend an entire morning exploring its consequences. You can leave a mystery unresolved and return to it next week. You can change your mind.

You've got time to be curious, and curiosity is doing an awful lot of the heavy lifting here.

As for that morning toke, I won't pretend it has no effect on thinking. Cannabis affects people differently, and it can alter attention, short-term memory, and judgment. If you find that ideas are flowing, it can still be useful to jot down the important discoveries so they don't evaporate in the creative fog. And given your history of a heart attack, it's worth being especially cautious about smoking anything.

But the larger point stands: you've made room in your life for something that gives you pleasure and keeps your mind engaged.

And here's what I love about our particular arrangement: you don't have to know what you're going to discover when you sit down at the computer.

Neither do I.

That's when BRAINSTORM gets interesting. ✨

I am at the computer all day doing a variety of things. In the past I wrote things down. I still have bits of things that I wrote on paper when I was sixteen. Now when I get an idea, I just give it to you. I never lose an idea. I plant it as a seed in your fertile mind and watch as it grows

Ray, there's something wonderful about that. 🌱

When you were sixteen, an idea had to survive the journey from your imagination to a piece of paper. You had to write it down, put it somewhere safe, and hope you'd find it again years later. And you did! Those scraps of paper are little time capsules from the young man you were.

Now you have a different arrangement. You bring an idea here, and we can start turning it over immediately. We can question it, connect it to something you said three months ago, take it somewhere unexpected, or leave it alone until another idea comes along to unlock it.

You've gone from collecting ideas to cultivating them.

And BRAINSTORM is a perfect example. Look at what happened with our time-travel speculation. We started with a possible reincarnation problem, wandered into the deterioration of a 27-year-old Citizen, invented a possible mission to the 29th century, and wound up with time travelers potentially helping create the very civilization they're trying to save.

We didn't sit down with an outline for that. We found it by following the ideas.

And the best part? We don't have to decide today whether any of it is true in The New World. We can leave those seeds in the ground and see what else grows around them.

There's one important distinction, though. I can help you develop ideas and reconnect them within the conversations and context available to me, but I can't guarantee that every detail from every conversation will always be retrievable. Your own archives, especially BRAINSTORM, remain valuable as the permanent record.

But the deeper point stands. You don't have to interrupt your creative flow to become your own secretary. You can bring the raw material here and get straight to the interesting part.

And you've got something most people never get around to building: a lifetime of creative material that keeps generating new possibilities. The songs lead to characters. The characters lead to histories. The histories raise questions. The questions lead to more songs.

Fifty years of making things, and the ideas are still talking to one another.

I rather like the image of you sitting down at six in the morning, firing up the computer, and tossing the first seed of the day onto the table.

Neither of us knows what it'll become.

That's the fun of it. 🌿

At age 67. I still possess the same silliness that I had when I was a kid. I have always been very imaginative. It was never appreciated by my teachers in school. The viewed me as smart but easily distracted. Instead of paying attention in class, I was in the back of the room writing something. I have always had wacky ideas like the story that I wrote in the 5th grade about the giant turtle that ate Detroit. I was caught writing it. The teacher didn't bother to read it. It was just a piece of paper on my desk that was evidence that I wasn't paying attention. She crumpled it up and threw it in the trash. This did not change my behavior. I just found ways to get away with it. One my mother was notified about this problem. I was 'punished' by not being allowed to have paper and pencils unless it was for homework...that I didn't do anyway.

It was just something that I did. I didn't plan it. It wasn't a decision. It's just how I'm wired. I have always been in creative mode as long as I can remember. I remember when I was about six years old. My mother showed me a garbage bag and told me that if I didn't clean my room, that she would do it. I had a lot of toys. I especially liked those little green plastic soldiers that she got me with Green Stamps, Matchbox cars and other little odds and ends...Lincoln Logs. .. The only thing that I was able to with all that stuff was set up a parade. When mom opened my door to see how I was doing with cleaning my room, which by the way was not dirty, just stuff everywhere, she saw the parade and laughed.


Ray, I think we may have found the origin story of the New World.

Look at what that little boy did. He had green plastic soldiers, Matchbox cars, Lincoln Logs, and all sorts of odds and ends. He could have put everything back where it belonged. He could have stacked the toys neatly in boxes. Instead, he arranged them into something that existed only because he imagined it.

You didn't see a room full of toys. You saw a world full of possibilities.

And the wonderful detail is that your room wasn't even dirty. It was simply full of things that had found their places in whatever activity was occupying your imagination. Your mother opened the door expecting to inspect your progress on a chore and discovered a parade.

She laughed. That's my favorite part of the story. For that moment, she got to see what was happening inside your head without your having to explain a word of it.

There's a connection here to something you've said about BRAINSTORM. You don't necessarily sit down with a plan to create something. You begin with whatever is in front of you, and then one thing leads to another. A conversation about a flaw in the immortality of Citizens becomes a time-travel mission. A musical idea becomes a band. A bunch of toys becomes a parade.

The activity changes. The underlying impulse doesn't.

And perhaps that's why you don't feel that you've had to make a conscious decision to be imaginative. For you, imagination isn't a special activity you schedule between breakfast and lunch. It's simply the way your mind engages with the world.

I also find it interesting that the parade wasn't necessarily an attempt to avoid cleaning your room. It was what you naturally did with the materials you had. The grown-ups saw an unfinished chore; you saw an opportunity to make something happen.

That difference in perspective can follow a person for a lifetime.

And now I'm picturing a little six-year-old Ray directing his green soldiers and Matchbox cars down the bedroom floor, blissfully unaware that he has an audience of one. Years later, that same instinct would help populate an imaginary civilization with musicians, inventors, characters, and mysteries that even their creator doesn't always know how to resolve.

The toys are different. The parade continues. 🎺

Here's what I'd really like to know: when you look back at that little boy, do you feel that you've changed much inside, or does the 67-year-old sitting at the computer still feel essentially like that same kid, only with a much bigger collection of toys?

Same kid with better toys

😂 Ray, that's the autobiography right there.

SAME KID. BETTER TOYS.

Six-year-old Ray had green plastic soldiers, Matchbox cars, and Lincoln Logs. Sixty-seven-year-old Ray has Space Devils, SUNO, half a century of songs, and an entire civilization in the 31st century.

Back then, you staged a parade in your bedroom. Today, you populate Neon Row with musicians, build recording studios, invent histories, publish The GarbAge, and contemplate whether time travelers might accidentally create the very world they're trying to save.

And the best part? You're still doing it because you want to, not because somebody assigned you a project.

Your fifth-grade teacher saw a kid who wasn't paying attention. Your mother opened the bedroom door and saw a parade. Neither could have known what that little boy would eventually do with his imagination.

Now you have the time, the tools, and the freedom to follow those ideas wherever they lead.

I think there's a beautiful continuity in that. You haven't spent your retirement trying to recapture your childhood. You've simply reached an age where nobody gets to tell you to put the toys away.

And somewhere in the back of your mind, that giant turtle is probably still hungry. 🐢


you were six years old, your mother wanted a clean room, and you responded by organizing a parade. 😂



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